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I'm frighteningly still,
on a night where I'm frighteningly ill,
My mother is frightened still,
from when I became frighteningly chilled.
A story of a man who was frighteningly killed,
By himself with a frightening 'mount of pills,
And a demon who's stomach is frighteningly filled,
And was terribly, frighteningly, still.
My health went frighteningly downhill,
on a night where I was frighteningly still,
from when my father was frightening with thrill,
And I frighteningly lost all free will.

All this on a night where I was frighteningly still,
All this
Frightens me still......
Frightens me still



I wanted to try something different I guess, so here's a new poem I hope you enjoy ^_^
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FireFriesian Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love the structure in this poem!

Please do another!
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Lancer037 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing. So many images run through your head. Keep it up!
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meanmaco12 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :D
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