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My lack of motivation leads to
S̶a̶d̶n̶e̶s̶s̶
Boredom,
Amongst other things.
It leaves me with the inability to
L̶o̶v̶e̶
Write,
At times.
A few fallen stars won't change the sky
It will still be
B̶e̶a̶u̶t̶i̶f̶u̶l̶
There,
It won't fade.
And sometimes I wish my poetry would
T̶e̶l̶l̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶t̶r̶u̶t̶h̶
Mean more,
But it will never.
I wish I could tell you that I'm
A̶l̶o̶n̶e̶
S̶a̶d̶
A̶n̶g̶r̶y̶
N̶u̶m̶b̶
L̶o̶s̶t̶
F̶o̶r̶g̶o̶t̶t̶e̶n̶
Interesting,
But my story isn't that great.......



Figured I'd try something new, so here goes nothing.
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FireFriesian Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow... I love your stuff!
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
....this is one of the few poems with crossouts that I approve of. XP Well done! 
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meanmaco12 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Your approval is greatly appreciated, thank you very much ^_^
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! :D 
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